I found that the last version seemed to have two ideas; honesty and doing honest feedback well. I’ve gone for the latter angle. Love to hear what your thoughts are. https://vimeo.com/122059995
The video is out of focus because I was standing away from the camera a bit too much. A nice visual reminder for where I’m at; the shapes are there but it’s still a bit fuzzy. Sorry about the swearing, lost most of it except the RTFM bit because I think that may be necessary. https://vimeo.com/121853623
Still writing, so this is not about delivery but content. Would love to hear what your thoughts are on this! https://vimeo.com/121001501